Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Swimming Poem

Swimtime

Splish splash splosh
Under the water
 Sounds like crashing waves
Splish splash splosh
Learning how to swim
Splish splash splosh
Like warm waves in the wind
Swimtime

2 comments:

  1. To Courtney
    I really enjoyed reading you poem!
    I like your poem because you used really interesting adjectives my favourite one was 'sounds like crashing waves'.
    Next time I think you won't need a goal!
    From Loren

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  2. To COURTNEY

    Your'e a really good poem maker, I think you should be a poem maker when you grow up. I loved your poem. Maybe next time don't change anything 'cause I loved it

    From LEAH

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